In today's world sleeping pattern have changed than that of our ancestors. People nowadays, sleep less than 5 hours which is considered very less. Hindustan Times reported that 80% people in every country are suffering from the same problem. Resulted in increasing stress level, blood pressure etc. and many other problem in individual and society. We will discuss about the same.
Change in lifestyle level and competition have made their life challenging. Every body is trying more and more to earn extra in short time. In modern world, use of digital media and phones have made there schedule more difficult. Office work is done at home by Laptops and cell phone. Rather than relaxing they are forced to complete the work load. In recent study, Indian Railways have started paying the train drivers 100% salary if they work in overtime, everybody will avoid relaxing and do work in this case.
On the other side it has a negative impact, this trend will hamper the society. For instance, less sleep will result in tiredness, obesity, home sickness. They will indulge in digital world but not in practical world. Participation in another activities of society will get reduced, will take drugs to avoid stress. This will highly impact our society.
In my opinion, Government should take some action by educating people about less sleep and guide to how can they improve it. Strict actions should also be taken to force companies to reduce pressure on individuals for the job so that work and life balance be mantained together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0390625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36643965085 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65234375 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4923613528 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8947368421 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4736842105 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224108028916 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653449354905 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949409931369 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139660666383 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106212952316 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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