Nowadays, more people are in favor of reading electronic book rather than paper books.
Do you think the advantages of using electronic books outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that people tend to gravitate towards e-books as a source of reading rather than print books in recent years, when technology is having such a huge impact on our lives. While there are some drawbacks of e-books, I stand by the opinion that their benefits are greater.
On the one hand, there is no room for doubt that reading e-books lead to some negative aspects. The first objection is that fastening our eyes on the screen on a daily basis is a key rationale for eye diseases such as short-sightedness or astigmatism. Especially, children could be far more prone to such problems associated with e-books than adults. The second argument against the proliferation of electronic books is the dispersed reading time. For instance, using a mobile phone or laptop as a device to read, it’s likely for readers to be distracted by messages or e-mails.
On the other hand, I hold a strong belief that there are more upsides than downsides when using e-books. What I take my priority in is the flexibility and convenience of electronic version of books. A telling solid is that reading e-books would not require to bring a heavy pile of books. The second merit that should be taken into consideration is that e-books could make sizable positive changes to our environment. Using e-books could diminish the vital importance of cutting down trees, which is a pivotal process in producing traditional print books.
In conclusion, despite some potential problems, it seems to me that we gain more than we lose from the development of e-books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bringing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: bringing
... that reading e-books would not require to bring a heavy pile of books. The second merit...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90874524715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77694642037 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8599259363 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318489188486 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105810944903 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059279096129 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174893703869 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061515337656 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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