Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society. However, there is still no agreement about what a perfect society would be like. What, in your opinion, would be the most important element of a perfect society? What can people do to help create an ideal society?
People have always marvel at the phenomenon of this universe. There is bewildering variety of sophisticated and luxurious advancement in this Earth which has helped people to live luxurious life.Perhaps, I see many fundamental elements to be amended to develop perfect and ideal society to be lived on in near future.
First of all, Society is made of each and every individuals and their coordination and cooperation plays vital role in advancing it. Unless each member of society gets civilized there is no trace of better society is left. Moreover, every member has to develop sense of correct t...
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People have always marvel at the phenomenon of this universe.
People have marvels always at the phenomenon of this universe.
which has helped people to live luxurious life.
which has helped people to live in the luxurious life.
every individuals and their coordination and cooperation plays vital role
every individual and his coordination and cooperation plays vital role
there is no trace of better society is left.
there is no trace of better society which is left.
Libertine individuals will never be act like building block.
Libertine individuals will never be acted like building blocks.
community activities to keep abreast of every new form of advancement developing society.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
a recent research survey have shown that
a recent research survey has shown that
Sentence: Whatsoever people should develop gregarious nature to bring eccentric and egocentric individuals to start harmonious life.
Description: The fragment Whatsoever people is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Whatsoever with adjective
Sentence: In a nut shell, Each people have different traits of character so each member has his own responsibility to create ideal society by contributing any form skills, education, knowledge and other joyful activities.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to Each and people
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No. of Words: 254 350
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No. of Different Words: 159 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.406 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.897 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.091 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.569 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
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