It is becoming increasingly expensive to keep museums open to the public. what do you think is the best way of funding them, example; government, business and individual ?
Funding museums is becoming increasingly expensive to open for public. In my opinion, I believe that government and business companies have responsibility to give assistance for museums.
To begin with, government have more responsibility to fund museums, because individual pay taxes and they have other family responsibility. Therefore they are not able to give assistance for these buildings. secondly,museum represent national culture and preserve their old things,which are vital for next generation. youth gets knowledge about their heritage, that is very important for their learning someth...
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both views and give your 61
- Some people think that sports played in teams are better than individual sports others don't think . Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- In some countries and cultures old is people are highly valued wind in other cultures young is more valued discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Many parents believe that when their children read book for entertainment, they are just wasting their time, and that they should read only serious, educational books. What is your opinion about this? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
... they have other family responsibility. Therefore they are not able to give assistance fo...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...to give assistance for these buildings. secondly,museum represent national culture and p...
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Suggestion: , museum
...assistance for these buildings. secondly,museum represent national culture and preserve...
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Suggestion: , which
...al culture and preserve their old things,which are vital for next generation. youth ge...
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Suggestion: Youth
...gs,which are vital for next generation. youth gets knowledge about their heritage, th...
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Suggestion: , which
...s of this, ticket will be more expensive,which are not affordable for people. They can...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'donate'
Suggestion: donate
.... Further, business companies should donates their money for museums. These types of...
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Message: You should probably use 'design'.
Suggestion: design
...ey for museums. These types of building designs very beautifully and its represent city...
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Suggestion: Companies
...utifully and its represent city beauty. companies can organize their events such as exhib...
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Suggestion: Tourist
...ome organizations give fund for museums.Tourist industries also gain profit, if foreign...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...person visit museums and art galleries. Therefore these industries also have responsibili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63573883162 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07419768694 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4537764751 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.3157894737 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3157894737 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163988969721 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647532345198 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922212818275 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129796499553 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684341972824 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.