Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year the tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation.
What are the primary causes of deforestation?
To what results may it lead?
Plantation of trees plays a significant role in the regulation of climate. However, due to cutting down of trees at a larger scale has put the atmosphere of planet haywire. The following essay will shed light on the causes and effects before making a final conclusion.
There are many causes behind deforestation. One of the major causes is urbanization. In the pursuit of providing facilities such as high rise buildings, incredible infrastructure, efficient transport and communication systems, and so on trees are axed to pave way for the development. Recently some of the forests were being transformed to smart cities which enhance the overall quality of the lives of citizens. However, repercussions are already been seen. The surface temperature of those cities has shown a rapid increase. In addition, the overall pattern of rainfall has got affected which has kindled scarcity of water.
The other cause that has triggered the removal of trees is agricultural expansion. Owing to a rise in population, the demand for agricultural products has shown a sharp increase. Woods are cleared for the cultivation of different food crops. Consequently, effects such as soil erosion and floods are visible. The survey of one reputed environment agency has shown that jungles which are cleared off for farming have augmented the risk of nearby living areas. Moreover, it has spiked the exploitation of land to meet the demand. As a result, grazing has gone for a toss thus has inflated the fodder prices for such animals.
To sum up, urbanization is the need for an hour but not on the cost of the environment. Depletion of forests can provoke the natural hazards which can be detrimental for living beings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... pave way for the development. Recently some of the forests were being transformed to smart...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96473963822 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2377998761 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5263157895 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7368421053 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101017041313 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322292432024 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417971300647 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635632742395 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471433301022 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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