In town and cities large shopping malls should replace the small local shops. Do you agree or disagree.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that locals shops are replaced by large shopping malls. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, i do not entirely accept this and i will discuss why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prepoderant ones is that shopping malls provide ample facility to tha people, can not only contribute to give a platform of multiple stories, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not one can only benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their life with much ease,efficacy and convienence. Needless to say, all these merits are stand only one in stead, as far as augmenting of chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned .
There are, however some pitfalls, which easily overwhelm the potential benefit of local shops in prefernce of people. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend people not only realized its gravity but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions, when it comes to today ever changing lifestyle. Besides its impact on local people living style is far reaching indeed. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this upcoming epoch.
In view of arguements outlined above, one can conclude that despite its drawbacks,the benefit of shopping malls are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87732342007 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6838540762 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8448997129 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107947079288 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039831108592 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528344703159 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070955086324 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385471536882 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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