In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Some people are calling into question whether big shopping malls are a threat to local retailers. It has been often observed that development of shopping centers have shut small shops as people opt to shop in the malls. This essay will analyze if this change has benefits or drawbacks.
Growth of big shopping malls have a positive outcome. As customers feel convenient to shop at one place instead of shopping at multiple shops. For example, people can buy from clothes to shoes at one place. Shopping centers have provided one platform to shop different products. People can buy grocery and electronic under one roof. This change has made customers life easy and has reduced their time to travel from one shop to another.
Another benefit of big shopping malls in comparison to small shops is that they bring more number of jobs. These malls hire hundreds of people to manage different services. For instance, they employ more sales persons due to large number of brands in one location. As per statistics, shopping centers have increased 10 percent jobs in marketing and sales. They help famous brands to develop in new countries. To illustrate, India’s Grauda Mall contributes almost 20 percent in growth of international brand such as Aldo and Tommy Hilfiger in India.
There are some detrimental impacts of these shopping malls. They discourage small businesses to grow and destroy their position in the market. That leads small shops to close. Although these malls have increased employment across the world, they have inflated the costs of living for common people. For instance, China observed huge inflation due to increase in number of malls.
To close, it is a positive change for society with few negative aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has often been
...lls are a threat to local retailers. It has been often observed that development of shopping c...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...shopping malls have a positive outcome. As customers feel convenient to shop at on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10839160839 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5145792311 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8671038603 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5714285714 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.619047619 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2380952381 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382527736163 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118958019965 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927041427127 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207605927553 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667557378984 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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