Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that in this era a wide of emerging technology is creating a huge gap between upper and lower class society. While others say that the gap is narrowing. This essay will argue that although there is the negligible difference among different class of societies due to peer pressure, I believe that this gap remains constant due to their high cost of these technologies.
One the one hand, expensive possessions are becoming a sign of status symbol. People are buying more because an individual is considered as a rich if one has upgraded mobile phone and vehicle so people wanted to buy the latest devices to look rich. For example, Apple company published an annual report about an enormous increase in sales of their product and the buyer were equally from the upper, lower and middle class. However, I believe that if an individual somehow manages to cut down money from his monthly income just for maintaining a rich image in the society but eventually have to suffer in other aspects like loans and debts which also create a gap between different classes.
On the other hand, the latest technological devices are out of the reach of a common man. It is hard to make both ends meet because of the inflation of prices and new gadgets are equipped with these latest technologies but their prices are skyrocketing. Only upper-class can afford these luxuries. For illustration, in the new Ferrari car, artificial intelligence is installed and its worth is 5 million USD which is much expensive. I believe that these expensive possessions are creating a huge gap between rich and poor and it is a symbol of richness for an individual.
To conclude, although belongings that have the latest technology are a sign of richness so everyone is trying to buy these but some of them are so much expansive and it remains confined to the rich elite class which gave birth to inferiority complex in other classes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... between upper and lower class society. While others say that the gap is narrowing. T...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o inferiority complex in other classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84545454545 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67774043693 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542424242424 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7839449586 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156558496805 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058371593208 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455425227997 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969788430691 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00797072780849 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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