Knowledge is one of the fundamental needs for everyone. There are many perspectives about the source of the knowledge, I will clarify that in the body of this essay.
Initially, In many ways experiences are very essential on our lives. However, with out experiences we cannot know the pros and cons for many things. For instance, there are many professions we can't practice if we just focus in the theoretical concept with out the practical side. By way of illustration, been a doctor by reading books or been an accountant with out applied the financial standers cannot let you excel and master your profession, In the reality, we learn many things as how to be a confident and how to be more independent in our live also how to make friends and solve problems only by experiences. Knowledge gained from Experiences with out monopolize in contrary with books the best books are unreachable or cost more. Experiences come from the real live and we don't have to spend more time in reading or learning many knowledge we don't need it on the real live.
Moreover, experiences is very essential to obtain knowledge. In the other hand, books are very reliable and significant source to gain knowledge. How not, all the experiences from the ancient period moved to us through books. Such, the practical time for many culture in the past and the medical therapy and descriptions. Also many theories that scientist discovered long time ago have been recorded in books and play a big role in the enormous development today. There are many aspect books can be enough to cover the need of the knowledge such as literature and poetry.
In the third place, gain knowledge from books can be forgotten with days. For instance, I cannot remember the books that I have studied in the college before three years ago. In contrast, I still remember a lot of experiences with my colleagues.
In conclusion, gained knowledge from books and experiences cannot be separated in my opinion for many reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, third, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86176470588 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76178036705 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7190707732 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227565439029 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081195842288 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071457908435 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142265932683 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463209895577 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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