In many countries children are engaged in different kind of paid work .some people regard this as completely wrong while other consider it a valuable work experience important for learning and taking responsibility .what is you opinion
The importance of in my countries children are engaged in different kind of paid word some people regard this as completely wrong .which was always debatable has now becomes more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion .this essay will elaborate both aspects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion .
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that children was childhood experience gain and strong body needless to say that all these merits stand countries are children are engaged in a good stead .
However there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly over whelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that student is not focus on study, it all was busy in work hence it is a apparent why many are against countries children are engaged .
According to the aguments aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefit of topic countries children are engaged some student has gain of study are instrumental indeed nevertheless the potential drawbacks shouid not be over looked either .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 198.0 242.827586207 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07575757576 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63251389343 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6551724138 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.5024630542 239% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.997092925 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 251.25 104.977214359 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.5 20.9669160288 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.75 7.25397266985 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312837775157 0.242375264174 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168678972358 0.0925447433944 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955945644202 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168678972358 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955945644202 0.0609392437508 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 12.6369458128 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 53.1260098522 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.9458128079 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.94827586207 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.3980295567 208% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.5123152709 209% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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