In many countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while other consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.What is your opinion.
Surely there has been time in the history where the lives of people have change more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals children are engaged in kinds of paid work important for learning and taking responsibility and work experience has been one of the most prominent topics in contemporary discussions. People have always been intrigue to analyze and explain many things about it. I will discuss my viewpoint in given paragraph.
To begin with, children are paid from different types of work. Children are distract them from their studies. If children are doing paid work they don’t complete their studies. They are unemployment. Moreover, mostly children do different types of work such as; labor. So children should spend their precious time on their studies. Furthermore, if they do paid work they are over burden and they are depressed.
On the other hand, that children who are engaged in kinds of paid work . If they do work they have more experience about their paid work. So, they have work experience they can get good jobs in other countries. They also have financially sound with do their paid work. Furthermore, they know that the value of hard money.
The importance of children are engaged in kinds of work can be debated, but the fact remains that there were several factors that lead to this theme and matter. Eventually, according to the above analysis, it can be concluded that I think children should work for more experience and know the value of earn money it can be predicted that in the near future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'distracted'.
Suggestion: distracted
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...en who are engaged in kinds of paid work . If they do work they have more experien...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...who are engaged in kinds of paid work . If they do work they have more experience ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or more experience and know the value of earn money it can be predicted that in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, i think, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90874524715 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59210221952 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501901140684 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3014765035 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7222222222 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299219940458 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107441696491 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904720139789 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185207584929 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204396181715 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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