Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Although a media like the television has gotten familiar people from different cultures and nations, but it seems to me the television has destroyed communication among friends and family.
If you abstractly look at the people's lifestyle in fifty years ago, you will figure out the great gap between the last version of life and the today life. Previously, people used to fulfill their desires based on relying on their neighbors. So that, they lived in short distances from each other. Before the invention of the television, people spend their free times on talking with each other, tellin...
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- Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are 50
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. 70
- It is important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts. 75
- For success in future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. 65
- Although some people believe in learning facts, but it seems to me that the facts without understanding the ideas and concepts are meaningless. 70
has gotten familiar people from different cultures and nations,
has been gotten familiar with by people from different cultures and nations,
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