You recently went to Australia for a holiday. However, your return flight was delayed by a day.
write a letter to the airline company. In your letter
introduce yourself
complain about the delay
explain the problems that it caused you
ask for a letter of apology and/ or some form of compensation
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John Lee- a passenger who took the flight of your airline from Sydney to Beijing on 3rd October. I am writing this letter in order to lodge a complaint regarding to the delay of that flight.
The flight should depart on 2nd October initially. However I was informed that the flight has been postponed for 12 hours because of the mechanical problem unexpected when I arrived at the airport. Hence, I have to spend over 10m hours in the airport without any extra care and compensation from your company. In addition, I had to miss the board meeting held in the morning ...
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