Essay topics: Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is widely acknowledged that modern technology makes more entertaining than ever before. Due to that several people believe films can be viewed using gadgets instead of watching movies in cinema whereas other set of people feel that watching films in cinema give more pleasure and feel good experience. This essay will offer my opinion by discussing both the views.
Latest growth in software industry makes our entertainment media handy and cheaper. There are various mobile apps which offers premium movies to watch with less price. Many elder people buy a yearly subscription that provides various regional and international movies which is equal to the expense of watching two movies in theaters. To prove that, Anna University had done surveys on why people prefer to watch films in smartphones and tablets than theater, the results show that 70% of folks prefer because of high ticket rates which is not affordable.
On the flip side, other group of people like to watch movies in cinema because of sound effect, to experience to watch in big screen and to stay focus on the films. Especially youth audience go to films in groups to enjoy the actor actions sequence, dance etc. These set of audience are fearless about the money which they spend since they don’t have much dependency and responsibility.
To conclude, according to me I like to use gadgets, computers to watch movies because the movie cost is high compare to few years back. To go to theaters as a family need to spend one big part of monthly income which is not bearable by many people like me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89552238806 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51500287759 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4654761762 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17573446799 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579484270192 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691786601921 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107808163881 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083011978273 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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