You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
.Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
.Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Hi Ravi,
I would like to apply for 10 days off to complete my ongoing semester exams for masters of business administration ( MBA) at Hosur university. I'm in the verge of completion of the course and i have exhausted all my leaves to complete the thesis and preparatory works.
Considering the importance of business continuity,i will be available over mails and for any emergency meetings.i have already spoken about my situation with Amit and Viky and they have agreed to support during my absence.
my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the team.But in long run, our department will benefit from my ability and implementation of smart factory solutions, which we are planning to carry out for a very long time.
I look forward to hear from you
Yours respectfully
N Balaji
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| 2019-05-23 | Amanpreet_1990 | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Ravi, I would like to apply for 10 days off to...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s for masters of business administration MBA at Hosur university. Im in the verge...
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Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...dministration MBA at Hosur university. Im in the verge of completion of the cours...
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Line 2, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plete the thesis and preparatory works. Considering the importance of business c...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...ng the importance of business continuity,i will be available over mails and for an...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g the importance of business continuity,i will be available over mails and for an...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve agreed to support during my absence. my temporary absence could be an inconve...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...agreed to support during my absence. my temporary absence could be an inconveni...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...e could be an inconvenience to the team.But in long run, our department will benefi...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ning to carry out for a very long time. I look forward to hear from you You...
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Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...r a very long time. I look forward to hear from you Yours respectfully N B...
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Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me. I look forward to hear from you Yours respectfully N Balaji
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Line 8, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hear from you Yours respectfully N Balaji
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99248120301 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99727579027 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6543376461 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198719666136 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101368230741 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447319231731 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101371708691 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452842570707 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.