Nowadays, some of the seats in sciences disciplines in various colleges in many countries remain vacant. Students are not opting science subjects in some of the nations which can be the root cause of serious societal problems in the near future. This essay will discuss the causes behind this issue followed by its impact on our social system.
Nobody can deny with the fact that huge investment to study science subjects, tough competition and no lucrative employment opportunities are the main reasons among students which are forcing them not to pursue higher education in this field. In country like India, for example, in 2018, 70% of the students enrolled in commerce instead of science in their graduation studies. Which means most of them don’t want to study sciences subjects and they believe that if they want to be the part of any good science or technical college, they have to pay a huge sum of money as fee with no further guarantee of getting a good job with handsome salary.
As a result, a country can face stern issues if same trend will continue for more than required time. And enough competent and skilled scientist, engineers and doctors will not be available for the betterment of the society and we have to outsource the services from other nations further which will unnecessary burden the economy of the country.
In conclusion, I reckon that there is no bad or good education, but universities should keep awareness campaigns or counselling session at the time of admissions, so, that students can be motivated and guided properly in the right direction as per their interest and competent. This will create a balance in the education system and one country can have an ample amount of skilled people in all disciplines.
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 89
- Nowadays not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries What are the reasons for this problem What are the effects on the society 93
- Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development, however, others think the social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96621621622 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62505869704 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.382070578 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191438683937 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732634886752 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341301928482 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105650506888 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481434227501 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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