There have been some problem with the bus service. especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, In your letter
1.Describe what the problems are
2.explain how these problems are affecting are
3 Suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to show my concern about the bus service provided by your company in Mahavir Nagar area. I am a resident of Mahavir Nagar area and using bus service number 285 running from Kandivali station to Mahavir Nagar.
I am using the bus service for past one year and my experience so far has been really satisfactory. But from past two weeks, I am facing problems with bus service in terms of buses running late and sometimes even cancellation of certain buses without any intimation. This problem is becoming a routine in the past two weeks hence it is causi...
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but also to other people who are using this bus service
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No. of Words: 231 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 231 200
No. of Characters: 1018 1000
No. of Different Words: 129 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.899 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.407 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.388 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.217 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.804 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.224 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4