Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of traveling to a work place every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, advancement in technology enables people to work directly from their homes. While some people argue that this approach has significant drawbacks, to my mind advantages of this policy far outweigh disadvantages.
On the one hand, an implementation of home-working may cause some issues with communication. For example, great team work and collaboration between staff members are essential in some workplaces. However, without face-to-face conversations these can be hardly achieved. Moreover, this policy might encounter employers to the problems related to employees’ performance. Employees might be distracted by domestic works or by other family members, which obviously will have a negative effect on their work.
On the other hand, this introduction might provide employers with much flexible range of applicants. For example, some people do not have an opportunity to travel to their workplaces every day because of a newborn child, but at home they can attend to their duties and look after their children simultaneously. another example is that it is much convenient for disabled people to work without having to travel. another advantage is that people save time, which is spent on trip from home to workplace. this time may be spent on more useful business.
In conclusion, even though there are some disadvantages of home-working, such as less communication between workers and distraction of employees’ from their work, I think that advantages as wider range of applicants and more rational use of time outweigh them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54621848739 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20549410075 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2842532132 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338009247876 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110233008568 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760101386761 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210194055147 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471226012402 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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