In contemporary society, many people are struggling with managing their life because complex things make them feel anxious. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, it is necessary for modern people to be able to plan and organize their life.
First of all, complex life is associated with more workload in people's lives, and knowing how to plan and organize becomes crucial for people. To be more specific, many people have difficulty managing and prioritizing their heavy works, so they always have to work overtime, and they end up having depression. At this point, time management is important for them. Prioritizing their tasks by triaging items with different deadlines or listing a to-do list is a handy solution for modern people. A famous British youtuber Ali always share his effective ways of studying so that he can study in medical school, a heavy workload major, and learn other habits such as playing piano at the same time. He even gets A plus at every semester.
In addition, complicated life means people have more social life than they had in the past, and mastering to plan and structuring their life will be beneficial for them. To further elaborate, nowadays people have more social events such as participating in different kinds of workshops, joining study groups or hanging out with pals. However, they also have to do other things as well, and planing their social life gets essential to modern people. One of my friends, Julie, owns a company and she still can participate in many social events even though she has to take care of her children at the same time. We all call her "have it all" women. And she shares her ways of having a lot of things at the same time is to organize her schedule and be more productive at every event. From her example, we can know the importance of planning people's life.
Lastly, complex modern life refers to an unhealthy lifestyle, and people have to learn how to plan and schedule their life in order to own health and happy days. To clarify that, modern people sometimes work overtime, sometimes have an irregular diet, and all the bad habits will lead to illness. Therefore, people have to plan their working schedule and healthy diet to keep life wonderful. Take myself for example, I used to work in a startup, and I had to work from day to night. I forgot to eat and do exercise all the time, and I ended up finding I lost weight and became really unhealthy. When noticing this issue, I started to set alarms to remind me of eating lunch and registered a gym to work out regularly. After a couple of months, I felt I was healthier, and I realized how important it was for modern people to plan their life.
To conclude, it is really vital for modern people to organize their life, especially when their lives are really unhealthy, full of social life, and works.
- TPO-34 - Integrated Writing Task A huge marine mammal known as Steller’s sea cow once lived in the waters around Bering Island off the coast of Siberia. It was described in 1741 by Georg W. Steller, a naturalist who was among the first Europeans to see 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, really, so, still, therefore, well, as for, as to, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72891566265 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50812215876 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483935742972 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.86738351254 643% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1642016002 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.391304348 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.652173913 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73913043478 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229753187252 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784684559348 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592800752475 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151183447718 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301427370973 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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