Nowadays people make new friends through social networks ans internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others think face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Social networking sites like Facebook, WhatsApp, Hike are changing our life dramatically. These sites start taking central place in our day-to-day life when it comes to share information with our folks or broadcast any personal event. Many people think that it's a convenient way to interact with world, while some argue that it's a waste of crucial time hence meeting people in-person is essential.
Firstly, It's undeniable that internet chatting groups are the easiest option to make new friends. Social media is virtual world where you can connect with the people of dissimilar culture for instance, sending request from Facebook to another person who live in different country can add you in their friend list easily.In reference to that, if you are from india and want to talk with person who live in Canada then it's completely possible using internet messenger. Secondly, social media introduce us to the diverse culture of world and people, also it's great to share unique thoughts, digital photos, videos and valuable information. Thirdly, we can pass any vital information to our friends and group of people within a second at anytime and from anywhere. Therefore, these social media sites and chat groups can play mighty role during dangerous situations and can save someones life.
However, only having friends on social media is not an excellent idea. Being a human we need to get in touch with our loved ones to cherish our relationships. Chatting on messages can be harmful for relation as we can't watch the facial and physical expressions of that person. When we talk with someone face-to-face, we can trust them more and feel comfortable. Cyber crime cases like blackmailing are increasing due to the fake accounts and active terrorist groups on the Facebook, to support this,survey took by World Cyber Security Organization in 2018, state that 59% suicides were committed because of the cyber crimes such as account hacking. Also internet sites can spread faulty information about us to the people when we are contact with the incorrect person.
In my view, making friends on social media and having thousands of friends is superb, but it's our responsibility to meet our friends often to celebrate and to avoid any hazardous event. We need to keep track on our friend list and have to aware about cyber crimes and security measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: it's; it is
...eract with world, while some argue that its a waste of crucial time hence meeting p...
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...can add you in their friend list easily.In reference to that, if you are from indi...
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Suggestion:
...need to get in touch with our loved ones to cherish our relationships. Chatting o...
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...sages can be harmful for relation as we cant watch the facial and physical expressio...
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion:
...out cyber crimes and security measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07731958763 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59923670704 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7967843972 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.125 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171876065728 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597476208407 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480430715762 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103725697893 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138181039143 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.