Nowadays, there are many different universities and colleges for students. It’s true that the great majority of people want to study at university, but many of them apply to college after school, because it provides some pros for them. Let us consider some pros of attending colleges.
Firstly, students can prepare for the future life at university while studying at college. It’s a well-known fact that in colleges most subjects depend on a concrete profession, but besides there are also basic subjects such as physics or mathematic which students learn during their first years at college. Combining these knowledges can make study at university much easier for them, because students have basic knowledge and experience in many subjects which will be explained deeper at university. For example, my best friend who attended college after school have better knowledge in mathematic, because he spent more time than I at university and, as a result, it’s easier for him to study at university.
Secondly, preparation for a career can take place while studying in college. There’s no doubt that many people want to start their own career as fast as they can and college is the best choice for them, because it’s the place where students can get a huge part of knowledge, for example, in mechanic or management. My best friend is an owner of a car service, and he made it by knowledge which he got at college in my city. In spite of lack of higher education he does his work very good and his service is the most popular place for car repair in my city.
Finally, there is a group of people who want or who have to increase their knowledge in a concrete specialty, so they attend college as a great opportunity for it. It’s often said that colleges and universities is for young people who only build their lives, but one should note here that not only young people apply to studying programs. For instance, my friend who owns a car service almost every year send his new workers, who are usually thirty years old, to college in order to improve their skills and to get a vital information which they have to use at work.
To draw the conclusion, once can say that every person chose by itself the way which he wants to evolve and colleges as well as universities are the great choices for people who know what they want.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Nowadays, there are many different universities and colleges for students....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80147058824 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56340093735 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492647058824 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4326731742 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.6 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287418660157 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122169202467 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736644362091 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18212244595 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419216617491 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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