Many people love their pets such as dogs, cats, birds, etc as a family. I believe that this is a good habit to love pets as much as people love and take care of their family members. Because pets change the people in a good way such as pets are good entertainment media, pets are faithful, and people influence people to become a more caring person.
First and foremost, pats are good entertainment for the people. They play with pets and clicking pictures with the pets. For example, One of my tutor who is about 55 years old. She lives alone. She has two cats and one dog. In the morning she goes for the morning walk with her pets. In her spare time, she plays with them. She loves pets as her child. That's the reason she lives alone happily without missing anyone. Therefore, pets are not only for entertainment but also a medium of keeping away from loneliness.
Secondly, Pets are vert faithful and intelligent. Most of the people keep pets for security. Not even the family, the police force also use pets as a soldier. I remember one the incident, Once upon a time in my colony on thief are stealing from many apartment flats. One day he was stealing fro that flat in which dog was pet. Dog bite vert brutality to the thief. Therefore thief got arrested by the police. So, Dogs save not only the owner of that flat but also save my colony from further stealing.
Last but not least, pets are very sensitive as a human. They express their emotions as humans. One the survey shows that children from that family, in which there are pets, learn things easily. They learn how to take care of others and own. Children's minds develop very fast as compare to the other child. So, for the good development of a child, people need to keep pets. For example, I and my siblings are grown up with pet dogs. That’s the reason we are a very responsible, disciplined and caring person as people say.
From the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that people should love pets as family and it is good for human development, emotions support, and entertainment purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56382978723 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33606339135 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507978723404 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2755503825 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2 100.406767564 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5333333333 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36666666667 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173885249318 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474428181652 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565840660129 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108169069323 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064605136309 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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