Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
Although, it is sometimes believed that having a lot of money could make a person happy, and it is considered an important reason for happiness. In my opinion, people may be happy without much money, and other aspects of life including satisfaction and healthy body play a vital role in happiness.
It can not be denied that money is mandatory for everybody to have a hassle free life. However, having only money is not enough to make someone happy because happiness is the state of mind, and it depends upon numerous factors. To clarify it with example, two couples are living in same colony, one couple is rich, but they do not have baby, while other couple has low-income with two babies, and second couple is much happier and satisfied than first one instead of having scarce resources of earning.
Apart from money, happiness is dependent upon various other factors. First of them is the satisfaction which means people would be happy if they are satisfied from their work whether it is study, job or any activity of daily routine life. Another aspect is related with the mental and physical well-being of a human. If a person is fit and disease free, then he would be a happy person because a sound body has sound mind also. Last but not least, people become happier when their dreams come true, and it is the most memorable moment of their life.
In conclusion, huge bank balance does not indicate the state of happiness of a particular person, rather happiness is controlled by plethora factors which varies from person to person. Therefore, only money can not be considered as a parameter for measuring happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...son because a sound body has sound mind also. Last but not least, people become happ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80782918149 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47586084144 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55871886121 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5577777333 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.583333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299800264883 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11032356055 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613343057406 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183697441927 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313210148074 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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