Tourism in less developed countries is advantageous or disadvantageous?
Tourism is definitely advantageous for the less developed countries. Because it will enhance the business opportunities for hotels as well as other relevant organizations like food shop and others. By tourism it is possible to sell the countries special materials to the tourists. So it will also bring some revenue as well. On the other hand this will spread the name of the country every where, so other business person from different country will feel encourage to start new business in that country. At the same time by this the people of that less developed country will be able to learn new things from tourists of different countries.
On the other hand it may be disadvantageous for a country. If any political unrest happens or any criminal activities occurred with the tourists. It will destroy the image of that particular country and ultimately it will fail to gain the chance of getting
developed.
In conclusion I will definitely support and encourage tourism for less developed countries.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-20 | sahar.sharifi.1984 | 88 | view |
| 2020-11-14 | ahmed0001 | 77 | view |
| 2020-10-24 | Patrick_17 | 70 | view |
| 2020-09-12 | sattar_iust | 88 | view |
| 2020-06-27 | Gohar Khan | 55 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...his will spread the name of the country every where, so other business person from differen...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 466, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'starting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: starting
...m different country will feel encourage to start new business in that country. At the sa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will fail to gain the chance of getting developed. In conclusion I will defi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 1207.87684729 70% => OK
No of words: 166.0 242.827586207 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10843373494 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.92707691288 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8557521033 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 139.433497537 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560240963855 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 379.143842365 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2433433846 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296717123143 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127864454072 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134572714725 0.071462118173 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195742819679 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812668455107 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.