The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is accomplished that increasing crime rate of young offenders has become a significant problem for the society today. Some people think that parents teach better parenting skills to their child. My inclination is justified in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, parents teach skills to their child is help to reduce crime rate by young people when parents have fundamental skills of parenting. Because human's behaviour mostly develops in their childhood by parents, to now react with other people, how handle their social and mental problems. From this, with good character and personalities being built up from childhood and children will have a concept of solving their problems peacefully rather than doing crime. As a result, the number of young offenders will be reduce significantly.
On the other hand, there are several solutions to stop the escalating crime rate of young offenders. Firstly, give more lessons of illegal crimes to the school or from social activities. From this, child will have and idea to what happens if they will commit crime, and youngsters are aware from punishment after committing crime. Secondly, governments can improve public security from putting more surveillance cameras and traffic police. This kind of process will reduce crime rate not only by young people but also by other people.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that parents teach parenting skills is not the best method to reduce youth crimes, instead of combine some other ways with it to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20408163265 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58733016533 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604081632653 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0113654757 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0769230769 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309457176454 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107427417668 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08575735309 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204443069932 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599034772618 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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