Tommorrow has long being considered as the seential part of people's life. In my opinion, it has a lot of benefits no matter for a person or for a country.
Tommorrow can help people save time and money, and all these items are essential in their lives. We are often required to make plan and strategies which include arrangement of scarce resources such as time and money. For example, when preparing for the final exams, students need to think ahead about how much time and effort to spend in each chapter. Therefore they can make full use of limited time to get effective preparation. However, if people don't pay attention to tommorrow, they will fair to make proper choices in terms of the volume of time and mone investment, so that result in a lot of waste.
As for the government, with tommorrow concern they can develope better. There are many fields that are related to a country's developement, such as education, military, technology. By considering tommorrow, the government is able to evaluate which kind of investment can bring the best future results. That a country compare each strategy by concerning future promotion is more realistic, and can also reduce the risk of making wrong decisions. Therefore, the countries can achive more and be more competitive by thinking more about tommorrow since it's decision-making can always contribute to a better tommorrow.
Overall, tommorrow is important to an individual because it can help them save money and time, and can also be crucial to the government for its strategic value.
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- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Other think money and appearance are more important.Disscuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
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- Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...me and effort to spend in each chapter. Therefore they can make full use of limited time ...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...fective preparation. However, if people dont pay attention to tommorrow, they will f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, as for, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98069498069 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80504521322 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4208844223 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2307692308 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735245828621 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285465785234 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355751599171 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600023828259 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324690847684 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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