teachers today do not get respect
Teacher as an influential person in a student’s personal life has a great impact. The controversial question which rises regarding this issue is whether students respect their teacher less than 50 past years. Some person believes students are treated enough respectful with their supervisors. Although, others hold contrasting opinions that declare student is more impolite rather than were in the past. In my viewpoint, I profoundly believe student are less respectful liken to past. I feel these ways for two main reasons which I explain in following assays.
To commence with, children in the contemporary era are deeply involved with cellphone and social media. Parents are busy, as a result, have less time to raise children. Owing to this reason, children sometimes grow up with impolite behaviors which are influenced by social media and friend rather than parents upbringing. This rude manner includes all aspect of social interaction like the relationship between student and teachers. My friends' experience illustrates this issue quite well. He is the manager of a big company and his wife is an employee. They allocate a very short time for their children. Their kids spend score of time on the internet and with their friend that has not polite treatment. My friend and his wife do not have any surveillance on children behavior. One day, the kid’s school ask him to visit the school’s manager. The manager complained from the impolite manner of his children with teachers.
Secondly, by increasing inflate, the economic circumstance of the teacher becomes harder. This lead to teachers concentrates on life costs rather than classes and their student. By less focusing on students, not only the education quality’s decline, but also students feel less intimation in class. If the student does not feel convenient with their teacher, they will not pay attention to them. An experimental trial was conducted last years reveals that student intention to participate in class was decreased because of teachers do not fulfill adequate educative criteria in classes. Owing to this problem, students do not treat respectfully with their teachers. In addition, increasing costs of life, compel the teachers to hold extra classes to make more money, as a result, they do not teach essential courses in school to push students in extra classes. This matter can ruin the trust between teacher and student. If the dependence is destroyed, the respect will be corrupted consequently.
To wrap it up, I personally believe, the respectful behavior of student toward their teacher decrease. This problem is because children are not well upbringing due to less time that parent dedicates to their kids. Furthermore, intensification cost of living make teachers in trouble, accordingly, they could not concentrate on their student and classes as there have to be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ough respectful with their supervisors. Although, others hold contrasting opinions that ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in addition, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2427.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31072210066 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86788181563 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531728665208 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2634697595 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6896551724 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7586206897 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75862068966 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159446176159 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497148709867 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529797897728 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111209911583 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655796070254 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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