In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
ces that use the natural power of the wind , waves and sun are too expensive to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities
to what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Natural energy sources play a pivotal role in man's life. Indubitably, they have a powerful influence on the man's survival. it seems that they provide people with a useful source by which they can continue their lives. This study aims to discuss that using the natural power of the wind. waves, and sun are good alternatives to natural sources
First of all, alternative energy sources can be very helpful to those countries whose resources are about to exhaust.For one thing, such countries try to use various types of power including wind, wave, sun etc. to generate renewable resources.For instance, In Japan, scientists found an energy-efficient way to replace hydrogen with petrol to run their cars.Another thing is that producing alternative sources offers the advantage of using recyclable materials. As an illustration, since 2000, a system of recyclable garbage collection has been designed in much of the world.
Second, it is often suggested that producing alternative energy sources can be helpful for the job market.In the first place, unemployment is the matter of controversy;therefore, through running some factories for the sake of producing energy, more staff will be employed.An example may help clarify the point. Thelatest statistics in china reveal that four out of ten men have been working in solar plants since 1998. In the second place, not only producing energy helps the government to employ more people but it also helps to keep the level of crime down.All in all, employed teenagers would rather work than hanging around with offenders in the society.
The last but not least, producing alternative energy sources can be beneficial to get a country out of the predicament of financial crisis. Doctor Jame Austin the head of economic department at Oxford university asserts that for countries that generate alternative energy sources, trading natural resources would be the best solution to tackle financial issues. The latest figures released by Ministry of Foreign Affairs revealed that 70% of oil and coal resources of developing countries are exported annually to European nation.In other words, producing such resources opens a wonderful gateway to developing nations.
On the basis of the above, it can be concluded that generating alternative energy sources is beneficial for many countries. However, the question is: can it improve the welfare and happiness of people in general?Only time will tell, but in the meantime, natural sources continue to influence every aspect of our daily lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, another thing, for instance, in general, first of all, for one thing, in other words, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.345 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91271351149 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.45367311 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.533333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127546173969 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513969874124 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447664354063 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781308744507 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433896147806 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.