Progress is unsaid rule of life. Every living being is trying to get evolved and trying to be better. In order to achieve this he has to travel and move many places throughout his life. Myself changed four different places to achieve good house, job as well as good community.
One who is looking for adventurous life can choose option of moving multiple times but most commonly people like me are not going to choose staying in one place. There are many disadvantages of moving like, no stability, away from family, every time adjusting to new environment can be difficult whereas, staying in one place seems to be good option. When we look at advantages of boons of moving, above disadvantages can be neglected. Firstly for better job we have to move to another place. A adventurous job can give us good money as well as good time. Sometimes shifting comes by default as one of my friend is government officer serving forest department and he must shift to new places after every 3 years. People serving is IT department move to new places by switching jobs to earn extra money.
My uncle is asthmatic with pollen allergy and every spring he moves to new places to avoid sickness. He moved and changed to three different places and jobs to stay healthy. Community is where you find your friends, love any social life. If my surrounding is not good where I am not feeling safe then the necessity of moving becomes priority.
The major disadvantage of moving is that every time you change place u have to start over and adjust to new climate, new community. After this holistic analysis I would prefer the option of moving because boons are more with negligible curse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to stay'.
Suggestion: to stay
... people like me are not going to choose staying in one place. There are many disadvanta...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...r job we have to move to another place. A adventurous job can give us good money ...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ind your friends, love any social life. If my surrounding is not good where I am n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, well, whereas, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7074829932 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49443825785 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1995024845 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4117647059 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345664623614 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117814358362 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851820245136 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205124641992 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536644620739 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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