People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Education is medium by people are getting knowledge. Different people have a different perception of attending college. Attending college provides better opportunities and career path. Personally, I believe that attending college brings good shape to our career and gives direction to our life. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explain in the following essay.

First of all, attending college broaden the horizon of our knowledge and gives us a vision to insight the importance of knowledge. It provides us with a route to move ahead to our goal and passion. In fact, whatever subject we like in school, we take it as our major subject in college. In college, we learn the core of the subject. Later, which we required in our upcoming life. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in school, My interest inclined toward science. To increase my knowledge, I chose to attend college with science subjects like physics, chemistry, and mathematics. This decision was not only increased my knowledge but also offered me a reputed job in MNC.

Secondly, attending college ensures students a good placement after college. Graduation is mandatory eligibility for the getting job. Subsequently, the basic requirement demanded by renowned companies is candidates should be at least a college graduate. In terms of qualification and knowledge, companies offer a handsome amount of salary and perks. Considering an example of CEO of Google, He is highly qualified and on the basis of his qualification and knowledge, he has hired as CEO of Google.

Furthermore, many students opt for the option of attending college because they want to help their family financially and have a desire for receiving respect from the family and society. The main purpose of the students for attending college is to fulfill their economical need, support their family and earn respect from society. For instance, society does not respect those people who are not attending college, jobless and wasting their life.

In conclusion, people are attending college because they want to master in their specialized subject and garb the opportunities which they will acquire after the completion of college.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22969187675 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8758273006 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526610644258 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9484437709 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1739130435 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5217391304 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277719252988 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767606860905 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624054298295 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157176344286 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786567132193 0.0645574589148 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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