Instructor must praise student on positive behavior and ignore negative behavior.
Author says that The best way to teach is to praise
positive actions and ignore negative ones. I agree
to this recommendation. Explaining, I strongly believe
that the best way to teach is not to praise positive
action and ignore negative ones but is makeing
everyone to be a good ones. Specific crimstances
lead me which adopting the recommendation as the
following:
First, we will lost the good children who have
negative maner if we ignore them. Children are future,
not all. Praise in negative should not be, teaching to
children to best way. I strongly believe adopting this
recommeindation would be not advantages.
second, negative ones in today may be
a great people in the future. Not only ones behave do
worse they are teenage. Teenage in today is not easy
for all! Negative ones can not better, if only prainse
positive actions, ignore negativeone. Negative ones
may not positive be having, but if we praise them only,
they not think they should be positive person later.
conclusion, specific circumstances are which
adopting the recommendation would not be advantage,
I am not agree to the the recommendation. Ignore
negative manor when they will not be positive behavrio
in futre. But they can, if do not ignore them. we should
not ignor negative person but should make them think
that they can be a good man future like positive
person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... that The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative one...
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...ctions and ignore negative ones. I agree to this recommendation. Explaining, I st...
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...endation. Explaining, I strongly believe that the best way to teach is not to pra...
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...t way to teach is not to praise positive action and ignore negative ones but is m...
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... and ignore negative ones but is makeing everyone to be a good ones. Specific cri...
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... but is makeing everyone to be a good ones. Specific crimstances lead me which a...
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... to be a good ones. Specific crimstances lead me which adopting the recommendatio...
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...which adopting the recommendation as the following: First, we will lost the go...
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...n as the following: First, we will lost the good children who have negative m...
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... we will lost the good children who have negative maner if we ignore them. Childr...
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... if we ignore them. Children are future, not all. Praise in negative should not b...
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...e in negative should not be, teaching to children to best way. I strongly believe...
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...e should not be, teaching to children to best way. I strongly believe adopting this ...
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...st way. I strongly believe adopting this recommeindation would be not advantages....
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...ommeindation would be not advantages. second, negative ones in today may be a grea...
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... second, negative ones in today may be a great people in the future. Not only o...
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...e in the future. Not only ones behave do worse they are teenage. Teenage in today...
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...re teenage. Teenage in today is not easy for all! Negative ones can not better, i...
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...ive ones can not better, if only prainse positive actions, ignore negativeone. Ne...
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...tions, ignore negativeone. Negative ones may not positive be having, but if we pr...
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...e be having, but if we praise them only, they not think they should be positive p...
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...they should be positive person later. conclusion, specific circumstances are which ado...
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...lusion, specific circumstances are which adopting the recommendation would not be...
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...e recommendation would not be advantage, I am not agree to the the recommendation...
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...tion would not be advantage, I am not agree to the the recommendation. Ignore neg...
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...d not be advantage, I am not agree to the the recommendation. Ignore negative manor...
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... agree to the the recommendation. Ignore negative manor when they will not be pos...
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... when they will not be positive behavrio in futre. But they can, if do not ignore...
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...ey can, if do not ignore them. we should not ignor negative person but should mak...
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...gative person but should make them think that they can be a good man future like ...
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...y can be a good man future like positive person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 58.6224719101 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10869565217 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78725495248 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 215.323595506 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452173913043 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4161009139 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.97078651685 523% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207087577296 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845825145196 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727826296309 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717844758481 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723564913212 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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