Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention an issue with the article published in Sydney Time magazine on 1st August. This article described knowledge about Amritsar, a beautiful and well-known town in the northern part of India.
It was noticed that the Nankana Sahib, one of the holiest places, is described as the most appealing attraction in Amritsar. However, this place is located in Pakistan from 1947, after the division/partition of India and Pakistan.
Since it is available in a separate country, the information seems misleading and could disseminate false details which would inevitably bewilder readers. Amritsar is known for many famous places such as Golden Temple, Wagah border and Jallianwala Bagh which could be covered as part of your article.
As a result, the revision of this article with accurate information of the town would be much appreciated. Being a tourism hub of North-India, Amritsar should be well-defined with many beauties it holds. Besides, a separate article could be published on Nankana Sahib since it has a remarkable history to share as well.
I hope to see the updated version of your article soon.
Yours faithfully,
Pardeep Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25773195876 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91061437756 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7950314682 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18977297705 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073769014479 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585056537128 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104799528392 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718676571536 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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