Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to
show that we care about them.Others think that there are better ways to show that we
care about them.Discuss both views and give your opinion
Friends and family are the most important parts of an individual's life. While showering our near and dear ones with gifts will certainly create a good impression of us among them, it is also important to help them when they need us. This essay will discuss why helping our parents, relatives, and companions during crucial times is more important than giving them gifts and presents.
To begin with, on the one side of the coin, we can make our families and friend happy by buying them presents and gifts. If we give presents and gifts to the people who are close to us, it will create a joyous occasion which can bring happiness in their life. For instance, when we present our loved one gifts during special occasions such as anniversary or birthday, he or she becomes very pleased with us. For these reasons, offering our near and dear ones gifts can be a good way for us to show love for them.
On the other side of the coin, helping our friends and families during their troubled times is more important than presenting them gifts. When any of them will face any danger, they will need our assistance. For example, if our close relatives fall on an accident, they may require us to take them to hospitals. Additionally, we can offer them advice when they will try to make any life-changing decisions and our advice may prove to be beneficial for them. Our loved one will appreciate our efforts in helping him or her when he or she need it.
To conclude, we can not live our everyday life without our friends and families. While giving them gifts will bring delight in their life, it is more important for us to aid them in need. To recapitulate this in my opinion, helping people who are near and dear to us during crucial time is better than presenting them gifts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...mily are the most important parts of an individuals life. While showering our near and dear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56875 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37946947869 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471875 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4479578617 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228602857941 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102287391112 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521244783248 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179391217414 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428933920747 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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