In some parts of the us, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
Nowadays, in the number of areas of United States there has been a rise in the restrictions imposed on movement of the people, especially the young ones after sunset has elapsed. However, they are allowed to go out if any mature member of the family accompanies them. In my opinion, I believe this to be a positive approach.
Firstly, such conditions are enfoced, when there are chances of any mishappenings, particularly social unrest. As during the night, there is often poor visibility, childrens might fall victim to such crimes due to the fact that they might not be clearly able to distinguish between the good and the bad conditions. To illustrate, if a child is allowed to roam outside during a situation when terriorist threat is immenient, consequences could be determinetal. As a result, if any elderly member or a relative takes the responsibility to accompany them, it could assist to avoid any danger posed to them.
Secondly, it is often seen that they fall victim to crimes, specifically coming under the influence of negative peer pressure. Such scenarios are extensively common when they lack proper care and support from their loved ones. Hence, if they are allowed to be outdoor during any catastrophic situation, a stranger with a criminal intentions can influence them to do wrong things, which otherwise could have been avoided. For instance, dual income parents appending a short amount of time with their offsprings may not be able to shower them with same affection like full time parents. Thus such individuals look for emotional attachment outside their family, eventually making them vulnerable to fall victims to trained people, who are expert in manipulating pupils in these age groups.
In conclusion, it is beneficial to avod letting out unmatured member of public when curfews are in force. This could assist to prevent any wrong doings because of their inability to distinguish between the situations and falling prey to strangers with criminal minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'intention'?
Suggestion: intention
...c situation, a stranger with a criminal intentions can influence them to do wrong things, ...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...to shower them with same affection like full time parents. Thus such individuals look for...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... same affection like full time parents. Thus such individuals look for emotional att...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12923076923 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84493778595 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6650049017 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147340329818 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513652628292 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378064680055 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882351598572 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347125978559 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.