The reading states that replacement of internal-combustion engine with a fuel cell by using a hydrogen as a source of power, is more beneficial and provides three reasons for support. However, the professor refutes each of author's point and states that hydrogen is not a solution to this problem.
First of all, the reading claims that hydrogen can be readily available from renewable sources such as water and natural gas. However, the professor posits that hydrogen is not easily available. To run the fuel cell, hydrogen has to be in pure liquid state which is highly artificial. So, technical...
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