Your friend has asked you to help him to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher.
In your letter, you should tell:
what experience the teacher has
why you think he/she is suitable
how to get in touch with the teacher.
Dear Dave,
Hope this letter finds you in the radiant of health and the best of spirits. Well, I'm just writing to inform you that I've found the music teacher you were looking for your daughter.
To be honest, she is one of our companions from the high school. Did you remember Lisa ray? I recently bumped into her at one of the coffee shops in downtown. We'd a long chat, and she told me about her employment in Toronto high school as a music instructor from the last five years. What's more, she even houses a group of pupils at her home every weekend to give them music lessons.
I thought it would be a good idea to have someone known to teach your daughter. On the top of that, it might give you comfort that she is in safe hands. Also, she charges a marginal fee of 50$ per week, which is quite reasonable as compared to others.
you can reach her at 4125515242 anytime after 5 PM. Besides that, you can even add her on Facebook and send a message. I've already informed her that you might contact her soon.
just write back to me if you need any other help.
best wishes,
Ram
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Dave, Hope this letter finds you in the radian...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...f health and the best of spirits. Well, Im just writing to inform you that Ive fou...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ell, Im just writing to inform you that Ive found the music teacher you were lookin...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ic instructor from the last five years. Whats more, she even houses a group of pupils...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
...ds. Also, she charges a marginal fee of 50$ per week, which is quite reasonable as ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...uite reasonable as compared to others. you can reach her at 4125515242 anytime aft...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...add her on Facebook and send a message. Ive already informed her that you might con...
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Suggestion: Just
... her that you might contact her soon. just write back to me if you need any other ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
...ack to me if you need any other help. best wishes, Ram
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you need any other help. best wishes, Ram
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25120772947 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08401340157 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647342995169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0623116178 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33729847292 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100467755043 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857431878094 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186178610241 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978654144106 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.