The article states that the reason behind the declination of sea otters, is environmental pollution , not attacks by predators and provides three reason of support. however the professor opposes the article and states predators are the main reason of declination in otters populatiob and refutes each of the stated reasons.
Firstly, the article states that pollution is the main reason, why the otter's population has declined severly. The professor refutes this theory, explaining that there have been found no dead bodies which makes the predators role more plausible.
Secondly,the article says that there has been also a descending trend in the population of other marine mamals such as seals and sea lions which are not of interest for predetors like ocra. The professor explains that the as a result of huan attack, whales have dissapeared from shores and that this change of habitat has lead to a change in their regular diet. Therefore the whales are ore likely to eat even sall anials like sea lions and seals.
Third, the article states that the uneven distributation of eliminated population is due to the eneven diffusion of pollution in the sea by the ocean currents. The professor poses this reason, asseting that the variance of change is yet another proof that predators have caused the declination in population of sea mamals. she explains that since the orcas are too large, they are unable to attack where water is shallow. the descending trend of population as a atter of fact has stopped where water is too shallow for orcas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f sea otters, is environmental pollution , not attacks by predators and provides ...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pollution , not attacks by predators and provides three reason of support. howeve...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... and provides three reason of support. however the professor opposes the article and s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
... and provides three reason of support. however the professor opposes the article and s...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'otters'' or 'otter's'?
Suggestion: otters'; otter's
...t pollution is the main reason, why the otters population has declined severly. The pr...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'predators'' or 'predator's'?
Suggestion: predators'; predator's
...en found no dead bodies which makes the predators role more plausible. Secondly,the a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...dators role more plausible. Secondly,the article says that there has been also a...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...lead to a change in their regular diet. Therefore the whales are ore likely to eat even s...
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Line 8, column 324, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...eclination in population of sea mamals. she explains that since the orcas are too l...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...nable to attack where water is shallow. the descending trend of population as a att...
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Line 8, column 461, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... the descending trend of population as a atter of fact has stopped where water i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05447470817 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59613838212 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501945525292 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4671418973 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.090909091 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 21.698381199 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149262204866 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620037697539 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365790924509 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912053468626 0.162205337803 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268066826911 0.0443174109184 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.