2. In today’s world it has become more important to save the money rather than spending. Do you agree or disagree ?
“Spending money wisely; as it is an easy step; save money strongly; as it even clips.”
Human existence always talks about three basic amenities- food, clothes and shelter. To fill these one needs a catalyst which is ‘Money’. It enables one to meet the desires. Wise people always opine to save money for future endeavors where as many youngsters believe in spending it. The detailed discussion of this topic, leading to conclusion, is enumerated below.
Saving money has always been the major concern of any human being. Having a good bank balance leads to a conducive journey of life. Such people who tend to save most of their earnings use money very wisely. Instead of spending money on useless things, these people save to buy things on intervals. Example of the richest and finest people from the globe definitely inspires on to be more saving and less spending.
Warren Baffet once said in an interview, “don’t spend on things that you don’t requires now, as one day you will be compelled to sell the things you need”. Such stands the power of saving. Saving certainly helps one in the worst time. Inflation, medical treatments, personality development, all require huge amount of money. Money saved helps a person in hard times. Even a commendable bank balance makes one more ‘self-abnegate’ and ‘altruistic’.
However, the other side too has some congenical arguments. Some believe that life is lived only once and why not to add some pleasures and enjoyment to this. This attitude oftenly leads to spending. Also generations of 21st century is flamboyant and is determined to garish all that one has. Thus gets involved in spending.
Conclusion to this topic only has a quarter disagreements and 70% agreement. Savings play a vital role and once a person starts saving, he starts investing in life. One should be very careful while choosing between savings and spending.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18412698413 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15689345979 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1919266847 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0416666667 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248595732643 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639663037109 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550732793389 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130069060544 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653829817655 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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