A friend you met last year has invited you to visit them in their country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
request advice about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing
find out about the food
Dear Chris,
Thank you so much for inviting me to spend a few days with you. I’m just writing to ask what things I should pack for my trip to your country, Canada, next month. I would also like to bring something for you and your son. Tell me what sorts of toys your son likes to play with. Also tell me the size of the shirt you wear. I would like to bring a nice Indian outfit for you. I am sure you will love it. Would you like a red shirt?
I also want to know about the type of clothes that I have to bring as it will be the peak winter season when I reach Canada. I would also like to know which activities I can engage in during this time. Is it possible to go for snowboarding, ice-skating or shopping in the malls? I don’t mind spending some extra dollars.
As you know, I am a foodie and love trying international cuisines. I have heard about the Canadian sweet Parfrey, which tastes delicious and I would like to try it. I would also like to try some other Canadian dishes.
I hope to receive your reply at the earliest.
See you soon!
Manthan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e to try some other Canadian dishes. I hope to receive your reply at the earli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21153846154 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22753412634 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0745478608 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.5294117647 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2352941176 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05882352941 4.34317383033 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252744400908 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908046766001 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588612021568 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118403817943 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878730625794 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 8.37731958763 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.25 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.05 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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