It is better for boys and girls to study separately rather than study in mixed sex classes. They are less distracted and this leads to better results.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years group studies has embarked into this modern era of studies. It increases competition and interest in studies. Some people believe that girls and boys should not study together and some think vice versa. This discussion has been a hot topic and debatable.
On one hand, it is true and natural for boys and girls to be attracted towards each other.
As people say opposite sex attract each other. It can divert some student’s attention from studies. You can easily get distracted at that age and think about fantasy thinks about opposite sex.
On the other hand, you see lot of same sex marriage and relationships developed in today’s generation. I don’t believe that segregating groups on sex basis will eliminate this issue. Boys can get attracted to boys and same for girls, which can also be the cause of distraction from studies. We should encourage our children’s to study in group. Girls and boys are at same level and we should not distinguish between them. A study in group is all about sharing the knowledge, dividing the groups will not be a viable option to achieve this. When say group, we don’t mean it by girls group or boys group, we should stick to this. We should educate our kids of do’s and don’t while studying in group. Students should have freedom to study with their friends who are opposite sex.
Finally, it will not benefit boys or girls to study separately. Whole motive of group studies will be meaningless if we divide the talent into groups based on sex. We should treat all students equally irrespective of their age and sex.
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