do you like music
I like listening to music and I think most of us like music, too. There are so many type of music and like or don’t like a type of music depend on your hobby.
With me, I don’t really like a specific type of music and I don’t really like a specific singer, too. I will like a song when I listen it and feel it is a good song. I usually like listening to music when I happy or sometimes when I sad and sometime I sing along. I think I sing not bad and I like sing when I alone, when I happy or when I go to karaoke bar with my friend. I can sing but I can play any musical instrument.
I wish I can play a musical instrument because I think it so cool. When I have children if they like they can go to the musical instrument class. Playing an instrument will good for brain development of them.
Finally I think music is important because if not music your life will so boring
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
...ost of us like music, too. There are so many type of music and like or don't like a ...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s when I sad and sometime I sing along. I think I sing not bad and I like sing wh...
^
Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hen I go to karaoke bar with my friend. I can sing but I can play any musical ins...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I can play any musical instrument. I wish I can play a musical instrument be...
^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cools'?
Suggestion: cools
...usical instrument because I think it so cool. When I have children if they like they...
^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ll good for brain development of them. Finally I think music is important because if n...
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Line 6, column 75, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'bore'
Suggestion: bore
... because if not music your life will so boring
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.02793296089 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39730558364 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 176.041082164 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441340782123 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.950351599 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5454545455 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319347454979 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152682340034 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105510628824 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228995581281 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10788794853 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.8 12.4159519038 47% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.84 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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