You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in regard to vacation I am planning next weekend with my family. I have read good reviews about your ocean facing rooms online. I preferably want ocean facing king size room from Aug 3rd to Aug 5th, 2012 for 2 Adults. I also want the room away from the elevator.
I want some information from your end. I would appreciate if you could please provide me below mentioned information.
Please let me know the rates for ocean facing king size room for the above mentioned dates, and also mode of payments you accept?
As I am visiting this place for the first time, can you please let me know some nearby places which we can visit during our stay?
I also wanted to check the activities which we can do during this time of the year, that are close to hotel?
Please email me the information by July 30th at htoor1@gmail.com or call me on my cell phone at 209 559 8637.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Hardeep Toor.
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