Some people are happy to spend the whole life living in same place. However, others prefer to live in many areas over their life time. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
In this era of modernization, humans are running towards materialistic life. For some people life is like a travel book that's why they prefer to live in different places while others spend their whole life living at single place. The following paragraphs will portray both aspects of this essay.
Firstly, living in a one place is associate with choice as well as sentiments and emotions. Moreover, they have long-term association with place, people, social and cultural values. They fear to lose their bond with everything related with them. For example, many parents are living alone and in miserable condition when their kids left them in search of career and opportunities.
On the contrary of this, some humans enjoy being travelled to one after other place. The foremost reason for this can be their job profile. To illustrate this, army men generally commute to different places in their whole job time. Other reason could be, their curiosity for association with different people, their place and culture. Hence, they want to explore things at their own conditions. In my opinion, life is very short to waste in sitting at one place. One should experience and understand all traditions and values by spending time with them but, not forget their original roots.
To sum up, few human beings enjoys being emotional for their home, place, city whereas others mindset encourage them to feel the strength of fabric of country by associate with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09583333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49707815367 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2102502369 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283312065136 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949059554777 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862483690952 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17300735305 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106051486771 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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