In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure and successful future? do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the concept of successful career has been brought to public attention. Some people believe that identifying a secure career was easier in the past; however, there s is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubts in that belief. From a personal perspective, detecting a secure and successful job is far more easy today that its was in the past, given that people today are more experienced, educated, and skilled. Below I will strive my supporting points in more detail.
The first and foremost point, since the beginning of current century, the worlds has seen a plenty of technological inventions, the most significant one is the internet. Apparently, people today rely on the internet, which opens a door to a wealth of information, and makes them more experience. A recent survey conducted by the University of Toronto found people before starting a career, they use the internet to collect a valid information about it, which improves their ability to take an optimal decision. Consequently, the internet could ensure people’s success in their job.
Next, couple with technological invention, proper education is another reason why people today=are more successful. Recently, the education system has been improved drastically; given that schools today use open discussion classrooms, which help students to explore topics, integrate information, and be more independent. A vivid example that can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is schools is Canada teach their students by ideas and concepts instead of facts, which enhance students’ brain function and maximize the potential learning outcomes. Provided that people get advanced education, they not only earn broad knowledge; but also, enhances their personality. Therefore, better education system today has a positive impact on adults’ professional livelihood.
Finally, although the previous points are the first ones that cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point which should be born in mind. Adults today are more responsible than before. For example, in the developed countries, such as The United States, and Canada students start to work at young ages; furthermore, they take loans from banks to apply for collages. To put it in another way, they work to earn money for their tuition fees, and other college-related costs. Although taking loans put them under deep pressure, it helps them to be more responsible. Therefore, involving in the practical life early helps adults to choose suitable successful career.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, people today can identify their secure careers in the future than they were in the past. It is suggested that schools design learning activities that help students to detect their career in the future.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37136465324 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.884641521 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574944071588 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1926173962 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.136363636 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3181818182 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134110050213 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411980852511 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634950040072 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093223187403 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836353875434 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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