Technology has developed faster recently and caused many options to emerge. I personally agree that today people have too many alternatives in life. This essay will discuss the effects caused by the situation of having too many options.
Firstly, having too many choices in life will only lead to more extravagant people. For the example, the number of online shops have grown faster today, ranging from online clothing shops to online home furniture shops. This can causes people to be more thrifty, because people will have more flexibility in browsing numerous things. As a consequence of those frequent browsing activities, people will end up buying many things, including the unnecessary ones. If there were not too many online shops available, people would have not been that extravagant.
Secondly, the emergence of options varieties in people's life will lead to laziness and reluctance to struggle. For instance, there are many online transportation applications developed recently, that offer online taxi or motorcycle pickup services at reachable fares. This has not only eased people who are unable to drive and ride motorcycle, but also made them became less-motivated to learn those transportation. It is because they feel that their need has already fulfilled by those online services. That is why the existence of wide range of alternatives will only cause laziness.
In conclusion, having too many alternatives in life will only cause people to be more thrifty and lazy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...o online home furniture shops. This can causes people to be more thrifty, because peop...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this transportation' or 'those transportations'?
Suggestion: this transportation; those transportations
...ade them became less-motivated to learn those transportation. It is because they feel that their nee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33898305085 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78038436227 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580508474576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1806908127 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200454480944 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877534582813 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725720042444 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152089324747 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645122826511 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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