Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Undoubtedly, governments and political leaders play the most significant role in every society's prosperity. For a leader to be trustworthy, some people opine that they should stick to the specified set of principles,while others claim that they should consider the the public opinion in decision making.I believe that a political leader must strike a balance between following the principles and cinsidering the people's wants.
Undeniably, every society needs rulers who show veracity and follow the basic ethics of the society.Rulers are often taken as role models for people,especially the young generation.Youngsters emulate the behaviour and moral of their leader,therefore are profoundly affected by their set of ethos.Furthermore,the electorates of every candidate expect the selected person to stay loyal to his promises and mottos during the election competition.By adhereing to plans, the leader ensures social solidarity of the society.Hence,official have the acute responsibility of being good human,consistent and loyal persons to specified goals and plans in order to provide the welfare of people.
having said that,the presursor of democracy in every society is the versatility of its leaders.Extreme attachment to rules and principles that are defined by the officials may lead to tyranny and therefore, oppressing the mavericks and disagreeing opinions in society.In some unexpeted catasrophes such as natural calamities,war,and intense international situations,political leaders must listen to the demands of their people and demonstrate flexibility in coping with strict dilemmas.Additionally,no political leader is immune to making mistakes.During the course of time, they are susceptible to wrong desicions which may lead to debacles.taking into account people's comment can prevent them from making the same mistake and rectify their wrong doing.
In summary,although the officials and political rules of every country are bound to comply with defined sets of rules of every society,they should also reckon peoples critisism and comments regarding their performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99 5.05705443957 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.90907064829 2.79657885939 140% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 23.0359550562 260% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 257.098735897 60.3974514979 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.4 118.986275619 302% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 23.4991977007 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.4 5.21951772744 333% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235111432303 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133222797104 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923678721242 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141257107704 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111667616139 0.0667264976115 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 14.1392134831 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.8 48.8420337079 -30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 12.1743820225 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.35 12.1639044944 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.38706741573 142% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 11.2143820225 232% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.7820224719 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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