The map below is of the town of Garlsdon and shows two possible sites for a new supermarket.
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">The map indicates the two proposed location s1 and s2 to construct shopping complex in Garlsdon with population of 65000.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">In general, the two possible site is presented in a map of Garlsdon town where s2 is located in full-fledged area which is suitable for most of the people with access to railway and roadway.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Regarding the first site (s1), it lies between railway and roadway making it feasible to the people with cars and access to railway to reach the site. Moreover, around 10,000 people from Hindon can get access to the location and there is no issue of car parking since it is
located in countryside.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Likewise, the location (s2) can provide access to Bransdon and Cransdon situated in the distance of 16 Km and 25 Km with population of 15,000 and 20,000 respectively. Adding more to this the industry and housing is located near s2 giving it access to more people. It is also located in town centre with no traffic zone making it better place to facilitate the service provided by complex with no more problem of transportation as it is located near to railway as well as roadway. <o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'accesses'?
Suggestion: accesses
...nd housing is located near s2 giving it access to more people. It is also located in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, well, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.17085427136 4.92477711251 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.11961884518 2.65546596893 268% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 22.4926829268 218% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 224.753615099 43.030603864 522% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 307.0 112.824112599 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.75 22.9334400587 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 5.23603664747 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932221163074 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403442503282 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547824104764 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515625374561 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541696047225 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.5 13.2329268293 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 61.2550243902 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 10.3012195122 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.39 11.4140731707 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.9970731707 196% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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