The given draft illustrates the the relating procedures needed to generate electricity through hydroelectrictity in a power plant.
Overall, all the relative processes are broadly divided into two stages , as per different flows of water , with day time and night time respectively .
During day time, river water is allowing to channel through the High-level reservoir behind the dam while the intake is initiating, which finally drive the reversible turbines in the power station to produce electricity by the generator connected with power lines, transporting the energy to the national grid. Meanwhile, the water in the last step is stored in the low-level reservoir for further use.
When it comes to the night time, the stored water is pumped into the high-level reservoir across the closed intake.
To sum up, all progresses of generating electricity is well designed and fully descripped on the diagram, as well the flows of water in the day time and night time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
The given draft illustrates the the relating procedures needed to generate ...
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Suggestion:
...s needed to generate electricity through hydroelectrictity in a power plant. O...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sses are broadly divided into two stages , as per different flows of water , with ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...stages , as per different flows of water , with day time and night time respective...
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Suggestion: .
...ith day time and night time respectively . During day time, river water is all...
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Suggestion:
... time respectively . During day time, river water is allowing to channel throu...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'channeling', 'channelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: channeling; channelling
...ring day time, river water is allowing to channel through the High-level reservoir behind...
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...reversible turbines in the power station to produce electricity by the generator ...
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...connected with power lines, transporting the energy to the national grid. Meanwhi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88559326156 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0287365493 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959676274828 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049919790319 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509011789335 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558275891646 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467887603347 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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