The bar chart depicts the amount of males and females in Australia from various age categories that exercised regularly in 2010. Overall, it is clear than in most age groups, women did more regular physical activities than men, except for young people, at the age of 15 to 24.
Compared to other age groups, young males (age 15 to 24), exercised the most, at 52.8%. However, the number declined for men at age 25 to 34, where only 42.2% of them did regular physical activity. Furthermore, the percentage reached its lowest for age 35 to 44, at only 39.5%. For the next three older groups, age group 45 to 54, 55 to 64, and 65 and over, there was a rose, at approximately 43% to 46%.
Women who were in the youngest age category (15 to 24), started at 47.7%.. The number then increased to 48.9% for adult women at age 25 to 34. It then increased again to 52.2% for females at age of 35 to 44. Furthermore, the females at age 45 to 54 were the most women that exercised regularly, compared to other age groups, at 53.3%. However, there were decrease for the next two older groups, 55 to 64 and 65 and over, at 53% and 47.1%.
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 11
- Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up? 56
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 93
- The charts below show the average percentages in the typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
- The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... age category 15 to 24, started at 47.7%.. The number then increased to 48.9% for ...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...15 to 24, started at 47.7%.. The number then increased to 48.9% for adult women at a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, then, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3317535545 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38258093214 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492890995261 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4138771639 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230179375269 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104358023405 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068644103777 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193924926874 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905862360646 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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