You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.In your letter explain:Why you are writing to himWhy you cannot pay the rentWhen you will pay the rent.

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You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.

In your letter explain:

Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When you will pay the rent.

Dear Mr Ahmad Ali,

How are you Sir? I hope this letter finds you well.

I am writing to you regarding the rent money which is due to pay in the beginning of the next month. However, I am Khaled Saud , and I live in your building No.3 Apartment No. 21 on the second floor. I have been living there for 4 years.

Unfortunately, I am experiencing some financial problems these days because of the car accident that I had last month. to be more clear I had to spend too much money to fix my car and to compensate the other driver. As a result, I would not be able to pay my rent on the assigned date.

In general, I will try to pay the rent as soon as possible. I have talked to my brother in Australia to help me in my situation and I hope he will do. So, I appreciate your cooperation with me until I manage my matters and find solution to my money problem. I plan to give you the money within two months no more.

looking forward to a positive reply

yours sincerely,

Khaled Saud

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Dear Mr Ahmad Ali, How are you Sir? I hope this letter find...
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...he next month. However, I am Khaled Saud , and I live in your building No.3 Apartm...
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...the car accident that I had last month. to be more clear I had to spend too much m...
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...he money within two months no more. looking forward to a positive reply yours s...
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Line 11, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... looking forward to a positive reply yours sincerely, Khaled Saud
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...to a positive reply yours sincerely, Khaled Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, regarding, second, so, well, in general, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20725388601 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44729761099 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3885044775 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4615384615 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281999204661 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933804574585 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712455160204 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136346993049 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904812548889 0.0580467560999 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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